Eldritch Encasement... What are your thoughts ?

So... 4 chapters down, plenty more on the way. I'm just curious to know what you guys think of my first proper fetish story series, Eldritch Encasement. For those of you that don't know, Eldritch Encasement is a series I write, just to indulge in my big fetishes. (Those being second skins, creepy monsters, skintight cocoons, and other slimy encasement.) It's a series I'm writing simply for the fun of it, and because sometimes I just need to vent a creepy/pervy idea out of my system. The ridiculous "Lovecraftian" universe of Eldritch Encasement, is one made to serve any pervy idea that requires venting. It's not meant to be taken seriously, and I try to inject humor wherever possible to demonstrate that.

To summarize the premise:

"There is an other realm than Earth. One filled to the brim with all kinds of symbiotic and parasitic creatures that encase a woman's body within their own and feed off of their orgasms to survive. Portals appear at random, with the creatures popping out, encasing a poor woman within themselves, and slithering back theough portal before it closes. Enter Patience Whitely and April Mulligan. Best friends since middle-school, living together as roommates and each hiding from the other the fact that they love eachother. Their love is dragged from hiding when Patience's body fuses with one of these creatures and she feeds on April's juices. They are both captured by an unnamed organization that studies these perverted parasites. The organization offers to let them join their team, and live safely at their facility, away from normal civilization. Now in the thick of it, the two make friends with other people ar the organization who are fused with the creatures, and also do their best to help the organization capture and study the creatures and hopefully learn how to prevent further invasions from this realm of perversion and beasts."

If you haven't read it, please feel free to check it out if you're interested.

Links to the 4 chapters are here:

And there were a few pieces of art based on the series, done by LoverBoySora 

But yeah, please let me know what you think if you've read it. What have you enjoyed about it? What do you think will happen next? What would you like to see happen? What could be done better? Any advice, criticism, praise, or comments are welcomed.